The Writing Workshop 4-30-18
Writing Workshop[edit | edit source]
Welcome to The Writing Workshop! =D I'm Carolyn, the Creative Writing Assistant!
If you haven't figured it out yet, from now on I'll be taking over this article. (Mwahahaha.) But let us do take the time to appreciate the many years that Morgan has written this article for. *stands in silence* It shall be sad to no longer see her name as the writer for this article. T_T
#rememberingmorgan
The Writing Workshop is a special corner of the Navigator set aside for NorthStar Academy's lovely writers! Here, you can find prompts, writing tips, and a story/poem each month written by our own Creative Writing members! Start reading! Be inspired!
If you have any suggestions or comments, be sure to leave them in the Navigator Jabber so I can see them! You can also email me via FirstClass and tell me what you want to see in the next article!
Announcements[edit | edit source]
Permanently Tacked Up:[edit | edit source]
• If you want a Creative Writing folder of your own to post your stories in, just email me (Carolyn) or Morgan Raines and we'll get yours set up. =D I hope to see a lot of new stories this school year!
• If you and some of your friends would like to start a storyline, email me or Morgan and we'll set one up for you. Remember, it can be about anything!
• Make sure that you check out your friends' CrWr folders! They'd really appreciate your encouragement and feedback. =)
• Tell the newbies about our Creative Writing community! I know a lot of them are writers, and can't wait to get out there and share their stories with us!
New Creative Writing Folders/Storylines![edit | edit source]
• Out with the old, in with the new. Check out the new CrWr conferences, and if you want to you can re-live the old stories too. =D Our newest members are Anna, Karsten, and Spencer! Go check their folders out. ^_^
Other Announcements/Reminders:[edit | edit source]
• A Picture's Worth 1000 Words is OFFICIALLY RELEASED. Go check it out in the Creative Writing area!
Quote: "A professional writer is an amateur writer who didn't quit." - Richard Bach
Prompt 1:
"Hi... I'm your fairy godmother."
"I thought those only existed in fairytales."
"Yeah, well, there's a twist to it."
Prompt 2:
"This isn't the right way to the police department, Jack. You said we would go straight there and tell them what we know."
Prompt 3:
"Surprise! I'm back from the dead! Isn't that exciting?"
Prompt 4:
"This is a beautiful world."
"Shame you came from so far away to destroy it, right?"
"Not really."
Prompt 5:
"He lied to you, didn't he? He didn't tell you about his secret."
Prompt 6:
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Prompt 7:
Her anger dissolved into calm. For the first time in her life, she tasted the sweetness of serenity.
Prompt 8:
It's been 15 years, but I still regret what happened at the lake that night. It wasn't supposed to play out that way.
Prompt 9:
She opened her apartment door to hundreds of roses. She knew they were from him; he had found her.
Prompt 10:
This time, it was the princess' turn to rescue her dragon.
Introducing Your Protagonist[edit | edit source]
What’s wrong with this picture?
‘I wake up in the morning and look in the mirror, find my big green eyes crusted with sleep. I brush my beautiful brown hair and check my flawless skin for pimples, but of course I don’t have any, so I don’t need to put on any makeup. Then I walk over to my closet and put on my school uniform shirt and skirt, check my reflection one more time. Then I head down stairs for a delicious, filling breakfast.’
Obviously that paragraph is insipid to the point of hyperbolic, but it’s not like writing like this doesn’t exist. Remember learning the concept of “show, not tell” back in elementary school?
Yes, it’s still (and always) super relevant. Breaking out of the rut of the easier opposite, “tell, not show” is difficult, especially when you feel that you have so much information about a character that you feel you NEED to get to the reader, or they won’t have the image of the character that you want them to have.
Let’s start with the harsh reality: your readers are definitely not going to have the image you want them to have, so don’t worry about it.
And anyway, describing your character down to the most minute detail isn’t going to draw your readers to your character. They want to see their motivations, their emotions, their actions. They want to see what makes them ache.
If you’re writing a full-length novel, you have all the time in the world to show a full picture of your protagonist, antagonist, or anyone else in your cast of characters.
Don’t give your readers everything at once, and don’t give them features, give them emotions.
1. Ease Into It, And Always Start With What’s Important[edit | edit source]
When I was in college and first started talking about my writing with my friends, one friend—who I’ve known since pre-school—asked me to do two things for her.
Specifically, she asked me not to do two things.
One: No sappy chapter titles.
Two: Don’t introduce your characters by having them stand in front of a mirror and describe every feature they see (like that first example).
They were pretty fair requests, considering the conversation happened around 2008 or 2009, and you don’t have to Google for too long to figure out which YA series was popular around that time.
Give the reader the most important information about the character first: name, gender, age, and how they relate to the world you’ve developed.
Also, don’t wait three chapters to introduce the protagonist. Introduce them as quickly as possible. Then you give your readers the rest in little pieces, bite by bite, as the novel progresses.
But TFR, what if my character has significant features that will impact them thought the story? Please, give them that.
Does your character have a hair color outside the norm (i.e. fake red, blue, rainbow, etc.)? Give us that. Does your character have an obvious chase of heterochromia (aka when one eye color is different from the other? Give us that, but don’t be too blatant about it (tip: have it come up in conversation, or have someone else bring it up by teasing the protagonist, or asking how that’s physically possible). Does your character have some sort of physical ailment or missing limb, well, then your readers are going to need to know that.
But your whole vision of the character doesn’t matter. What you see when you think of your character isn’t what your readers are going to see, and that’s okay. Your readers are here for the story, not the description of the number of freckles he or she has on her cheeks, or the exact shape of their eyes.
2. Instead of Showing What They Look Like, Make Us Want To Root For Your Character[edit | edit source]
It doesn’t matter whether you want your readers to see your protagonist succeed or see them fail, you want them for or against your character, period. You want that more than you want your readers to know what they look like.
You want your readers to want to keep following your character on their adventures, want them to keep turning the page.
Turn all the pages.
Show your readers your character in action. How do they react after witnessing a bad car accident? How do they react to being in a bad car accident? How do they react to good news? How do they react to being hit on at a pair by someone remotely not their type?
Give them the elements of your character and send your readers on the adventure with them. Remember that paragraph of “tell” from the beginning of the post? Go back and take another read. I’ll wait.
Are you cringing yet?
Instead of doing that, show the readers how your character feels about having to get up in the morning. Are they the type who’s excited for school, to see all their friends and sit in the front row of each of their classes? Or do they not want to go to school because they’re constantly being bullied by the “it clique” and therefore drag out the process of getting ready for as long as possible?
Or show us a little about your protagonist’s home life. Does your character have to pick their way through a messy room to get to their uniform, or is it pristine and the clothes are hanging in the closet organized by color? Does their uniform fit, or is the skirt or pants too tight in the waist because they can’t afford clothes that fit better.
Show a neat appearance, or show them being okay with leaving the house unkempt because they’re running late.
Show us, don’t tell us.
Obviously there are exceptions to every rule (like all the ones I break in the #WhoIsTalyaNightingale manuscript). In writing, all rules should be broken. What’s important is that you break these rules the right away.
And then go back and edit when you’re done.
Have I mentioned the importance of editing yet in this post?
No?
Well, editing is super crucial.
Taken from: https://thefakeredhead.com/2017/01/14/2-tips-on-introducing-your-protagonist/
Or rather, this month's poem. Brianna Harpel, our writer over there at Caught in the Glow, is a lovely poet who never fails to amaze me with her poetry. Check out her poetry in The Creative Writers of NSA > Brianna > Poems!
Failure's Blessing[edit | edit source]
by Brianna Harpel
Failure is a blessing
Though we see it as a drudge
Without it… well
We wouldn’t learn much
Failure shows us where we fall
It shows us how to grow
And shows us how to know
When we need to let go.
To release our pride
To release the guise
To release our control
To release the lies.
It forces us to see
Our futality
And look up for a moment
So we can get up.
Failure shows us who we need
It shows us where to go
And shows us what we know
And who holds the road
The Father, the Maker
The world's Only Light
The All Knowing Author
The One who is always right.
It causes us to observe
Our weakness
And know He is there
So we can get up.
Failure is a blessing
And it can drag us down
If we let it close us in
And pull us to the ground.
But it doesn’t have to be
Cause its the blessing in disguise
Allowing us to know we need the King
Showing us how to fall on our knees.
That's all for this month! Hope you enjoyed reading, and don't forget to leave feedback. =D
So long, farewell, Auf Wiedersehen, goodnight U_U
- Carolyn Sie